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Baccano! Teh Abridged Series! (Series Completed)
05-03-2011, 12:52 PM (This post was last modified: 11-12-2012 05:06 PM by mattroks101.)
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Baccano! Teh Abridged Series! (Series Completed)
Latest Episode



All the rest of the episodes:
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Episode 1



Episode 2



Episode 1 redo



Episode 3



Episode 4



Episode 5



Episode 6



Episode 7



Episode 8



Episode 9



Episode 10



Ok, I re uploaded episode 2 with slightly better audio quality and hopefully over all quality.
Comments are greatly appreciated, just try not to be an asshole about it Tongue
(Not that anyone here so far has been an asshole)

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05-03-2011, 02:15 PM
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RE: Baccano! Teh Abridged Series!
Lots of potential, IMO. You seem to understand how some of the tried and true comedic gags work (like the part where the dude thinks to himself how to use his gun and that he left his stove on and when the dude is shuffling the cards), but the jokes themselves could use a bit more punch. Perhaps try to put some more unexpectedness on what the characters are going to say.

Voicing is decent and of course it needs some work, but for now, my biggest advice is watch your diction. Try to over-dictate and over-enunciate. It might sound odd to you, but generally will sound better to everyone else. Because as it stands, a lot of times it was hard to understand what you were saying. That's mah protips for ya. Smokin'

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05-03-2011, 03:24 PM
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Made more sense than the real 1st episode.
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05-03-2011, 04:24 PM
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Glad you guys enjoyed it. And I look forward to making more episodes.

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05-08-2011, 09:50 PM
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As a one time gag, I don't see anything wrong with it.
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05-09-2011, 04:50 AM
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Ladd's a character I could see work with a preselected lines from an existing source. Since let's face it, he's a thug and that works well with his personality. I think it's kind of a waste not to write him original dialogue though because I gotta imagine he'd be fun to write for and perform. But if continue using the Postal guy's voice it could work for Ladd and could write around the lines to make it funny.
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05-09-2011, 07:41 AM
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(05-09-2011 04:50 AM)Sketch Wrote:  Ladd's a character I could see work with a preselected lines from an existing source. Since let's face it, he's a thug and that works well with his personality. I think it's kind of a waste not to write him original dialogue though because I gotta imagine he'd be fun to write for and perform. But if continue using the Postal guy's voice it could work for Ladd and could write around the lines to make it funny.

I'll probably end up going with the Postal Dude voicing him. It's easier to write for and it's easier to voice. Writing for Ladd was gonna be a problem for me because I could not think anything that would surpass or even come close to the original writing for him. And I know I could never pull off voicing him. If I do write original lines for him I'll have to find someone else to play him.

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06-20-2011, 01:42 PM
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Second episode is up.

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06-20-2011, 01:55 PM
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Already checked it out and it was good, I liked it. Not bad. And yeah, it was an improvement over Episode 1. Big Grin

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06-20-2011, 01:59 PM
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Glad you enjoyed it Big Grin

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06-20-2011, 03:13 PM
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Oh, I also forgot to say that I loved the scene with that guy singing "You Sexy Thing". It reminded me of Alfred from B:TAS doing the same in Episode 4. Tongue

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06-20-2011, 05:49 PM
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Saw it and it was fun. I already post most of my comments on youtube and I'm too lazy to repeat themTongue

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06-21-2011, 12:46 AM
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Yeah, it was much better than how i read it lolz!!!

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06-21-2011, 06:55 PM
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Alright I re uploaded episode 2 with better quality, I hope. Feel free to re-like it but you don't have to comment again if you don't want seeing how it's the exact same video.

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07-13-2011, 09:14 PM (This post was last modified: 07-13-2011 09:17 PM by mattroks101.)
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Well folks I was suffering from writers block and bored so I decided to redo my first episode. It took about 3 days in all, and somehow it's still better than my original first episode. You may be wondering why it's so short, and that's because I couldn't really think of anything to add to it so I just stopped it where it was. Hope you enjoy.

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08-02-2011, 09:19 AM
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And forever and a day later, I make a third episode.




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08-02-2011, 02:16 PM
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Keep up the good work.

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08-03-2011, 06:23 AM
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Yap, the episode was very good.

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08-03-2011, 08:26 AM
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Well I'm glad I managed to do something right for once.

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08-23-2011, 10:05 PM
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Finally finished my fourth episode. The quality is all messed up. Not quite sure why. I'm gonna have to look into it. Anyway I'll be honest, it's not my favorite episode.




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