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Hawk's Honest Reviews
02-26-2015, 09:26 PM (This post was last modified: 02-27-2015 02:59 AM by TheHawk.)
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Hawk's Honest Reviews
Alright, guys. I've been around for a while, and I'm a rather harsh critic. I used to be a film critic professionally for a while and consider myself non-biased. I also have some free time, so here's what I propose. You post your content here and I'll watch it and give feedback, you know, the usual stuff that goes on in these threads.

My reviews will be short and to the point and honest. I don't want people getting pissed off because I gave them a harsh review. This is completely unbiased and honest.

Each episode will be graded on a 15 point scale that will be broken up into the following categories:
(I'll give an example of how I grade for the first category)
5 Points for Editing: Arguably the most basic part of making a quality product.

  1. The editing is terrible, the footage is poor, it seems as though no work went into this, etc.
  2. The editing is weak: There was some effort, though not much, etc.
  3. The Editing is Mediocre: You at least know how to use an editing software, there are still some problems though, is distracting.
  4. The Editing is Good: It looks nice and clean, very polished and solid.
  5. The Editing is Great: This looks fantastic! There is little to nothing to complain about.
I will be including audio mixing as part of editing.

5 Points for Voice Acting: How well does it sound, is there good delivery? Was the direction bad?


5 Points for Writing: Was it actually funny? Was there anything that stood out as good/bad?


I will take pacing into account under both the script and editing because I find it to be affected by both elements.

I will also mention things that stand out and give a pros/cons opinion on it when appropriate.

Well, let's see what you guys have.

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02-26-2015, 10:29 PM
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Ohai! Please review the dinglydoodle me and Earl of Bassington made.



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02-27-2015, 02:48 AM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2015 04:14 PM by TheHawk.)
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02-27-2015, 05:42 AM
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Tear this baby to shreds!


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03-01-2015, 04:13 AM (This post was last modified: 03-01-2015 04:14 AM by TheHawk.)
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"Your stuff is pretty good, but it's no TeamFourStar. Be more like them!"- My supportive roommate.

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03-01-2015, 07:05 PM
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Lemme give you some more work, heh heh heh heh.




You are what you put your time into.

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03-02-2015, 05:59 PM
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Be honest now Hawk. I want to make these better and I can't if you're lying about how good they are.

Thanks for all the good times.
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03-03-2015, 01:04 AM
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Here, it ain't like several other people have been asked about this video.

You are definitely the first. ... yes...definitely the first.


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03-03-2015, 01:23 PM (This post was last modified: 03-05-2015 12:02 AM by TheHawk.)
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"Your stuff is pretty good, but it's no TeamFourStar. Be more like them!"- My supportive roommate.

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03-03-2015, 02:56 PM
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You are what you put your time into.

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03-03-2015, 03:00 PM (This post was last modified: 03-05-2015 12:01 AM by TheHawk.)
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03-03-2015, 03:27 PM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2015 03:37 PM by SoDA.)
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RE: Hawk's Honest Reviews
(03-03-2015 03:00 PM)TheHawk Wrote:  Okay, I'm actually getting tired of giving these. Will someone at least give me something worth a 7 or a 9?

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03-03-2015, 04:26 PM (This post was last modified: 03-03-2015 09:13 PM by TheHawk.)
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03-06-2015, 03:13 PM
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Hey Hawk!

I appreciate the honest and critical aspects of your reviews. I was interested in possibly getting an extra review or two in for both an older episode and a newer one. You've reviewed our second episode of the Ha x Ha parody and I was curious to see if we've improved or if we're getting worse in your opinion. Here's the first episode:



Also if you have the time, we just released a mostly for fun parody of FullMetal Alchemist, and wanted your thoughts on that. As always, we want to create the best content we can, and all feedback is appreciated. Here's that as well if you're up for it:

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03-10-2015, 12:31 PM
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03-12-2015, 04:24 PM
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RE: Hawk's Honest Reviews
G'day. I've posted this to one or two other critique threads, but I still really want to get better. So here's the most recent episode of an abridged(kinda) series that myself and a few others are doing.





There's a couple jokes in there that only really work if you've seen a few of the episodes prior to this one. Dunno if that particularly matters or not, just figured I'd throw it in.

Thank you.

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03-13-2015, 11:32 AM
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Thanks for the review Hawk! I look forward to the review for the Fullmetal Alchemist Parody. I appreciate you taking so much time out to work on it and help us improve.
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03-29-2015, 02:37 AM
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RE: Hawk's Honest Reviews
Just a heads up, I have not forgotten you guys! Law school and work have just been sucking up all of my time lately. I've had both of your reviews sitting half finished on my desktop for weeks. I will get them done soon!

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04-01-2015, 05:44 PM
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Well, since submitting that video to be reviewed, I've released a new episode. I dunno if you still think it's worth reviewing. I just thought I'd throw that out there and let you take whatever action necessary, if any at all.

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04-06-2015, 10:30 PM
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I can either do the new one or the old one. It's up to you

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