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Abridged Quickie #2: A Food Wars! Thanksgiving
10-09-2015, 11:29 AM (This post was last modified: 11-22-2015 12:16 PM by jeshnyx.)
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Abridged Quickie #2: A Food Wars! Thanksgiving




I present to everyone the debut video of my Abridged Quickie series! These videos will be of whatever anime series I wish to tackle, and they'll be short of course as they'll be easier to make that way.

In this first video, we join the main cast of Persona 4 and... things take a royally interesting turn you may say.

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11-22-2015, 12:15 PM
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RE: Abridged Quickie #1: The King of Persona 4




Season's greetings and a Happy Thanksgiving to everyone! Let's celebrate this food-centered holiday with a food-centered anime parody! (Warning: your reactions to eating amazing food will differ)

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11-22-2015, 01:19 PM
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RE: Abridged Quickie #2: A Food Wars! Thanksgiving
The opening was a little slow, but once it found the running gag it really hit its stride. Great music selection XD.

I think the YouTube comments joke at the end was a little weak, but overall I thought it was a decent video. I got a chuckle out of it. The only thing I'd advise in the future is to trim your opening for the purpose of these quickies - you don't need much exposition to find out that oh, btw, the food makes people orgasm. Keep it up!

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11-23-2015, 12:04 AM
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RE: Abridged Quickie #2: A Food Wars! Thanksgiving
(11-22-2015 01:19 PM)eagle8burger Wrote:  The opening was a little slow, but once it found the running gag it really hit its stride. Great music selection XD.

I think the YouTube comments joke at the end was a little weak, but overall I thought it was a decent video. I got a chuckle out of it. The only thing I'd advise in the future is to trim your opening for the purpose of these quickies - you don't need much exposition to find out that oh, btw, the food makes people orgasm. Keep it up!

Thanks for the feedback! I had fun making this one and glad to see it's doing well so far at least Smile I will keep what you have said in mind while I am still trying to craft out a certain style for the show. I have great ideas for how it should be like, but still trying to find a perfect footing for it right now. I do see what you mean about just cutting the crap and go straight for the meat of the video. Will try for something like that next time!

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