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Spritestuff Reviews
10-17-2015, 06:03 AM (This post was last modified: 10-18-2015 07:25 AM by spritestuff.)
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Spritestuff Reviews
There are a million review threads on these forums. here's why you should use mine.

My review style is notes as I see them. I see a joke play out, here's how it affected me. I see a fuck up, I'm going to write, 4:01. visual fuck up etc.

This is beneficial for you, the content creator, because you can see exactly where you went right and wrong with everything. plus, I'll wrap it all up at the end with what you can do to do better.

Go.

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The main point of this is stream of conscious honesty. as a result of that, my grammar will probably bad. Also I will definitely write down what I/ what I think you should have done. This may come off as me thinking I am better than you. I do think that. but I try and be nice about it.

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I may say things that you will disagree with as a creator. and that's fine and can be valid. but that's half of what this thread is for. so If you really don't want to know how I would have done it better, go to Copley's thread.
http://www.abridgedforums.com/showthread.php?tid=2319

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10-17-2015, 07:36 AM
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RE: Spritestuff Reviews
Word! -- This has been out for awhile. It's sorta different from the videos I usually make, but I enjoyed editing it. Most if not all script credit goes to Coffin on this one.






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10-17-2015, 07:44 AM
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I'd really appreciate your criticism.



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10-17-2015, 08:25 AM (This post was last modified: 10-17-2015 07:25 PM by spritestuff.)
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Go see Age of Inside Out.
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10-17-2015, 02:02 PM
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RE: Spritestuff Reviews
I haven't heard too much about this one since it was uploaded, so I wouldn't mind a critique on it.


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10-17-2015, 07:25 PM (This post was last modified: 10-17-2015 07:26 PM by spritestuff.)
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10-18-2015, 01:22 PM
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RE: Spritestuff Reviews
This is gonna be a lengthy one...



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10-18-2015, 05:14 PM (This post was last modified: 10-18-2015 07:47 PM by spritestuff.)
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10-18-2015, 08:14 PM
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RE: Spritestuff Reviews
I really like the format of these reviews. I wouldn't mind getting my latest episode of my longest running series critiqued!



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10-18-2015, 08:38 PM
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I love the critique thread you got going here. Would love some thoughts on this. I mainly did the writing and voiced them a few.

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10-18-2015, 10:40 PM (This post was last modified: 10-18-2015 10:53 PM by spritestuff.)
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10-20-2015, 09:58 PM (This post was last modified: 10-20-2015 10:00 PM by spritestuff.)
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10-22-2015, 02:51 PM
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RE: Spritestuff Reviews
Yeah, why not.




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10-23-2015, 09:39 AM (This post was last modified: 10-23-2015 09:40 AM by spritestuff.)
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10-23-2015, 11:20 AM (This post was last modified: 10-23-2015 11:22 AM by AwesomeChroniclesUK.)
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Yeah, I've always had problems with sound effects. The main problem being I never know what ones to use. Like, if characters are in a forest or a hotel lobby or a bar - that's fine. I can find stuff for that. But most of the time they're just sitting in a room together with a computer. I've no idea what to do for that. I'll keep looking into it.

It's a good thing I haven't started writing episode 14 yet, so I can start taking on your notes from the get go as opposed to having to backwards engineer them. But you're right, I'll try and stop explaining jokes away. I've always been trying to just focus on first jokes, then other characters reactions to what's being said. Trying to make them actual character interactions instead of a joke book with a silly voice, I guess is the best way I can describe it. Clearly something's not working with it, so I'll have to look at the formula more closely. By all means, add me on skype if you have further notes/ways you think I could improve the writing.

Cheers for the input, take it easy.

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10-23-2015, 07:28 PM
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By all means your characters should react, but they should in a way that keeps the flow moving forward, or at least not slow down the story. It's really tricky to do that with a confused reaction.
Honestly the substance is there, but the technique needs refining.

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10-27-2015, 09:48 AM (This post was last modified: 10-27-2015 09:50 AM by Charleston.)
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RE: Spritestuff Reviews
Hey man, I promise I'll get back to your critiques and everyone else's eventually, I just have to find some time. Until then, I'm gonna ask for the same thing as you, though not with all my videos. These are just the episodes of my Death Note series which is the most popular thing on my channel. It's pretty obvious how I've improved (editing more than anything else. Also getting decent visuals after the first episode) over the 10 months or so between these episodes. I haven't gotten anyone to give these an in depth look, so I'm looking forward to this. Shit on them all that you want, anything you have to say is something I will look into.

















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10-27-2015, 06:11 PM
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Reserved for review.

Also I'll do the first episode and the last. we don't need to bump up my post count afterall.

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10-28-2015, 01:09 AM
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Well if you're only doing two of them, maybe the last two? Anything you say about the first one doesn't matter so much considering it's full of flaws that I believe I've (for the most part) fixed since making more episodes.

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10-28-2015, 03:36 AM (This post was last modified: 10-28-2015 08:48 PM by spritestuff.)
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