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Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged One-Shot
03-20-2017, 02:02 PM
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Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged One-Shot
This is my one-shot of Yu-Gi-Oh. I did all the voices. I made this knowing not much about Yu-Gi-Oh, but I think I did it pretty well.



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03-20-2017, 04:12 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged One-Shot
Great pacing. I really like the fact you didn't arbitrarily extend it beyond a minute and a half. You nailed the ending. Believe it or not, you could have made this even shorter: cut the pauses between lines and see how it sounds. (I'll do it to show you what I mean)

Project your voice more. Your loud should be LOUD until you need to back off.

What mic do you use? Your technical quality could improve. Thankfully, that's only a money problem.

This is a great start! You should do more of these!

You are what you put your time into.

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03-20-2017, 07:23 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged One-Shot
(03-20-2017 04:12 PM)Anax Wrote:  Great pacing. I really like the fact you didn't arbitrarily extend it beyond a minute and a half. You nailed the ending. Believe it or not, you could have made this even shorter: cut the pauses between lines and see how it sounds. (I'll do it to show you what I mean)

Project your voice more. Your loud should be LOUD until you need to back off.

What mic do you use? Your technical quality could improve. Thankfully, that's only a money problem.

This is a great start! You should do more of these!

Hey thanks! I was definitely trying to keep it short. Maybe if I made the disclaimer a little bit shorter?

My brother keeps saying when I record, I need to be louder. I guess it's true. I'll just stand a little bit back from the mic.

I used a Blue Snowball Ice. For the most part, when I use it, people can totally understand me, but I've had some trouble. I plan to soon upgrade it.

Thanks so much for the feedback! I would probably do another, but there was already a comment basically complaining that LittleKuriboh was better, and I shouldn't even try. Meh.
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03-21-2017, 02:37 AM
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Quote:Thanks so much for the feedback! I would probably do another, but there was already a comment basically complaining that LittleKuriboh was better, and I shouldn't even try. Meh.

That should make you try even harder!!

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03-21-2017, 01:18 PM
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(03-21-2017 02:37 AM)Anax Wrote:  That should make you try even harder!!

That's actually a very good point. Either way, I replied to his comment, and found out he wasn't actually a hater, just messing around. He's actually a fan of my channel. Go figure.
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03-22-2017, 07:29 PM
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Add me on Skype. Let's talk.

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